英语学习-20190410雅思大作文写作

参考来源：simon 雅思  https://www.bilibili.com/video/av20339838/?p=3

 

coherence 相关性  cohesion 凝聚，凝练性

 

 

下一句应该阐述你的观点：

否定：in my opinion it would be wrong to force teenagers to do ant kind of unsalaried work

支持：I completely agree that this kind of scheme would be a good idea 

单词：scheme  方案   schedule  日程  tackle 用具（tackle the problem 解决问题）

deter from 吓住 阻止  repeatedly 重复地   financial consession财务优惠  undoubtedly 毫无疑问地